Incubation Reading

After the discussion in class, it helped me a lot more in understanding the reading. I didn't realize that there was a story there. I thought that it was just another book about how to write and not really a story itself. This story was truly a Innovation Fiction. I didn't know that there were different types of fiction, I just thought that it was just fiction. The author was writing was telling us a story but also telling us a story within itself. I have never thought that i would read a story like this before, it just got interesting to me when we discussed it in class.

With the themes, I didn't know that there was so much red in it, like on page 27, when she removed her dot on her forehead. Who was Laloo? In our discussion, I learned that she was the childhood of the author. Even towards the end of the book, i wish that we could know more to what happened to Laloo, whether she died or not.

Kapil

Well this book was very interesting. I didn't really understand what the author was really trying to say. It was to me a very random book of information like things on cyborgs and George Clooney. The author asks the reader if they were boring us and they were really boring me. I felt like is was just random thoughts that were written down separately on a different day of the week and they all didn't connect at all to me. The author writes whatever they want just like they said on page 49. But being very random, the author still gives us examples of the real life, like kissing a mirror. I did think that it was interesting that it was really random.

Who was the cyborg in the story? I cant really connect the dots on this story, but she does write that they were the cyborg in the autobiographical information about cyborgs. The author writes what they want. I cant wait to talk about this in class because someone needs to tell me what I just read over the weekend. I could have read it again but I really didn't want to pick up this book again.

fileds and evenson

First Point of Interest:
It seemes in Field's story that they are thoughts. I know that my thoughts can be every where. For example: when you are just walking through a mall and not going through any stores, you notice the window displaces. They grab your attention as you pass by them but as you are walking by another one can catch your attention. Thats what it seems to me what is happening in the story. The author talks about silence, a girl (maybe the same gorl throughout the story), a cat, a billboard, and Edgar Allen Poe. In the end it ends withe the girl. The story could also be talking about the days of events as the person remembers but they are just thinking to themselves.

Second Point of Interest:
In the Evenson's story it seems that they are evaluating everything that goes throught the day just like how a journal goes but it seems that when the event is said and over with then they have to write about it giving it more details than a journal would. When I try to write what happen through the day i forget things or I just leave them out. There is a lot more detail than the Field's story. We are getting to learn about the characters more, like Doctor Rauch. The narrator starts to write down oberservations and compares himself to Doctor's Rauch's brother.