fileds and evenson

First Point of Interest:
It seemes in Field's story that they are thoughts. I know that my thoughts can be every where. For example: when you are just walking through a mall and not going through any stores, you notice the window displaces. They grab your attention as you pass by them but as you are walking by another one can catch your attention. Thats what it seems to me what is happening in the story. The author talks about silence, a girl (maybe the same gorl throughout the story), a cat, a billboard, and Edgar Allen Poe. In the end it ends withe the girl. The story could also be talking about the days of events as the person remembers but they are just thinking to themselves.

Second Point of Interest:
In the Evenson's story it seems that they are evaluating everything that goes throught the day just like how a journal goes but it seems that when the event is said and over with then they have to write about it giving it more details than a journal would. When I try to write what happen through the day i forget things or I just leave them out. There is a lot more detail than the Field's story. We are getting to learn about the characters more, like Doctor Rauch. The narrator starts to write down oberservations and compares himself to Doctor's Rauch's brother.